writerwithacause

This is an unusual idea you have here. :) Auditions are so trying. A young actor catches my eye . They can lead to so much crying. Beautiful, as you ...

Hi there, Julie here to review! :) Here are my corrections: I am lonely . I don ' t feel loved . There ' s a noise around me . ...

Hey, this is a great poem! you've left me pleasantly surprised. --On the outside, smiling away. --On the inside, dreading another day. I loved these lines, they describe the best ...

I actually thought that this is pretty good. It's a good example of how to say more with less words. :) One tiny thing: I can't see it. Can't feel ...

She , too , is following along, but she is more concerned about conducting everyone, even she keeps the conducting to a minimal since she's confident that everyone knows what ...

Julie here to review! Here are my corrections: Passing between years , That special moment With that special person In that special place of hers. Atop of a building We ...

“They only write stories about the winners . ” Her eyes glimmered with tears like the cosmos above. “But it’s the losers that make up the world. I wanted you ...

Well, first of all, the title should be spelled this way: Too bad summer's over. Next, I'll make some corrections on the text: The constant beeping in the background was ...

Such an original view upon suicide! I would have never thought of it as being a gift for someone dear, as being something completely un-selfish. And with this concept, you've ...

And there are two reasons, Justin and Mike. Justin and I have / had been together for one year and three months. "For" requires Present Perfect or Past Perfect. We ...

"Yeah, it's his new mix-tape." said Max in an irritable tone. It is -> It's. Also, before words that begin with a vowel, you should use "an". "Nice. I like ...

First of all, don't leave two line breaks between parahraphs. It is disturbing for the eyes, for mine at least. =D Secondly, this is an ample story, I imagine. At ...

Here is my review. I've written my personal corrections with red, and the phrases that I loved with blue. White. That’s all I see. Even though it’s completely pitch-black, I ...

I watch him, dazed, in the silence of the great music that filled the room is bare , yet he has filled it (also, I don't think "bare" is the ...

I liked your style and descriptions. As the user above said, you have to put some parts between inverted commas. The girl felt, because she could not see Ophelia smile ...