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Hello, llobalito8! Since no one has decided to review on this poem, I have decided to give it a shot. Very interesting scenes depicted here. I can vividly picture the ...

Wow. Such a sad poem. And I agree with Writing for love is a passion, you accomplished your job as a writer. I love how you break up your poem ...

Welcome to YWS, Myrcei. So glad you could join an awesome writing site! :) Hmm...Very interesting. This seems more like lyrics to a song not dramatic poetry, but if it ...

Hey Bittersweet! This poem is really wonderful. I love the imagery and you really make the reader see a piano in a totally different way. I now don't see it ...

Haha! This was so great! Sometimes I feel the exact same way when writing. I'm guessing that is your inner editor screaming at you. I wish that I could just ...

Haha! Oh my gosh! This was some funny stuff! Thank you so much for killing Edward. But Jacob, well, I'm a little sad about that. Guess I'll just have to ...

This poem sort of reminds of something Dr. Seuss would write! Fantastic! I love made up words. They are my favorite! As blue mountain loomed near, I think blue mountain ...

Oh my gosh! Such a sad song. I can actually sort of relate to the girl in this song. There were a few spelling errors that you should change. They ...

Hey, afterthought! This is a very good poem! Just a few fixes on this. I think that you should put one sentence for each line. It was all kind of ...

Ah, a very sarcastic like poem. Nice! I treat people with such hospitality, I clearly say "Welcome to Our Home", Maybe take out the such. It just doesn't fit there. ...

I'm not familiar with this type of poem, but from what I saw, it was quite good. You definitely described stars and their wonder. I don't think you really need ...

Okay, first of all, great poem! Such a sad ending. =[ You started rhyming in the second stanza. Then the rest of your poem was free form. That was really ...

Hmm...Great poem you have here. Not much to comment on, but let's see what I can do! ;) and horizons just a figment of my eye Okay...Well, a figment of ...

Haha, wow! This really made me laugh. Even though I am a Twilight fan, though not an Edward lover, I found this to be true. She DOES use the word ...

I can totally relate to this song. This is great! I, too, think it should go into the song section. But, can't change that now...=] I feel the pain of ...