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wretchednot

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: How Society Views Me

    Your welcome! And I am not the best at grammar but I don't think you made grammatical mistakes except the capitalization in some words like"Fat" and "Giant's Feet. But you ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: The Danger of Boredom

    Good! Good!

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Life's melody prolog

    Thank you. My grammar and such is a little off. T

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Life's melody prolog

    Thanks! And for the quotation I forget to take them out during editing but now I won't make the mistake again...hopefully. Thanks for pointers and compliment!

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Life's melody prolog

    Hope you like it(:

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Darwin

    Sad but very good keep on writing!

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Historical Fiction Re: Three Hundred Sixty Four

    Wow...sadish but deep

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: America's Cup Here We Come Chapter 1

    Very good in my opinion short but detailed and I like that kind of story

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Life's melody prolog

    Why thank you I'm glad you like it since this story was sorta rushed.

    Jan 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Life's melody prolog

    Thanks and I know I'm still new to this and if ya ever have any more advice I'd lobe to hear it(:

    Jan 5, 2014


It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind