wraithfound

WOOHOO! High five man! *virtually high fives you* I've read many of your other poems and this one seems like the best one you've done so far! You have improved ...

I loved this poem! I particularly liked how you described the relation between the narrator and their father. Good job, keep writing! God Bless, wraithfound

I thought the poem didn't really seem to flow at the begining. Also I noticed some spelling errors, but all in all it was a wonderful poem and I hope ...

I loved this poem! The way it was written and told and well everything! You've done really well for your first poem! Keep up the good work:)

I like it! I watch Doctor Who as well though not as big a fan as most:) The only thing that really caught my eye was that you seemed to ...

I loved it! I like the way you made it all rhyme!I'm curious to see what it will be like when you are happy with it:)