wordsandwishes

Thank you for the review:) In reference to the last line you mentioned, "them" is referring to the words as if they had been passengers on the "broken ship of ...

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Thank you for the review:) In reference to the cryptic line, the ambiguity is intentional. It is meant to allude to childhood trauma, which by nature tends to be allusive. ...

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Thank you for the review -and no offence taken in the slightest :)

I am afraid I've incorrectly labelled by work; I thought lyrical referred to the lyrical type of poetry, though now that you mention it, it makes far more sense that ...

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Thanks for the review! About the rhythm, in free verse poetry the general rule for rhythm is to pause at the end of each line, and punctuation (mainly periods/commas) are ...

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Sure thing! Okay, well I was reading I noticed that the stanzas where you were explaining your emotions were a little more wordy than they needed to be. And I ...

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