wonderlandashes

Thank you for the review. I was really trying to go with the original impression you had about the mentally unstable person waiting. The reason the last lines didn't connect ...

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I really enjoy this story, and it is an interesting concept that could be expanded upon. I think that making this longer would certainly be beneficial. It is very good ...

I don't know how to review this because it is so good… but I guess what I'm trying to say is… THIS IS SO GOOD! Keep writing!

I usually don't reply on reviews, but I have to say, "the TV static" was my favorite line. I read the word "static" as the verb form, not the adjective. ...

Hi! You wrote a solid review, but I noticed that many of the "cons" that you listed for the poem referred to grammatical issues. In poetry the rules for punctuation ...

Oh, thank you so much! Yeah, I agree about the punctuation. It wasn't my intention; the only words I wanted capitalized were Rejoice and Paradise. The others were just mistakes ...

Hello, I'm going to review this piece. I know. I'm so unpredictable. I think that the message is nice. However, the rhythm is pretty uneven, and it would really make ...