wonderland

Loved it! It was an interesting perspective choice, from a rubber ducks point of view. Wow, very original. YOu really played with it to. The reader can feel the strong ...

That was really good! My favorite part of poetry is figuring out the meaning, so I'll assume this meaning is about two men in love. Amazing peice I loved it, ...

That was pretty awesome! (Even though I dont know what 'Beowolf' is) I love your descriptions, they were strong and great, Like Nate said, your piece was super amazing and ...

Thats very awesome. I like how you repeated the line 'Poor Little Eraser Dog.' It made for brillant empiasies. I really liked this poem. That was really cute and simple! ...

This was wayy better then the first draft, so good job. Janette seems like a nice, strong MC, she's witty, funny and everything a main character should be. Your spelling ...

I love your writing style! It's somewhat like Laurie Halse Anderson's (She writes amazing books, like Speak. Read that if you haven't already) it's got a signature vibe from your ...

And thats it? That is a crazy amazing peice, right there! Congratulations on the piece! It's sweet and funny and quirky. Through your writing, I' just going to assume for ...

That is so sweet. Emotions captured=perfectly! Thats an awesome idea, a letter from heaven, and there are a trillion ways you could expand on that. Your description is wonderful and ...

I adore romance! Okay, so it was sort of confusing. You should italic the past, then keep the present in normal font. I really like your plot though, and your ...

That was very descriptive. I had to feeling toward your MC, because there was no emotion to make that tie. YOu could use emotion in here Isaiah was an annoyance ...

I'm not gonna lie, that was slightly confusing. A tire? Although, it is interesting and very well written. I'm anxious to read the next part, and i'll get on that. ...

Pretty good! I'm not really into poetry, but this was quite good. The only thing i'd suggest doing would separating into stanzas. That way the reader has a chance to ...

Don't tell us what it represents! THats no fun! Poetry is meant for the reader to figure out the meaning themselves, and my favorite part. Anyway, this was strong and ...

I was running around my room in a rush, trying to find my IPod touch. Alright, so, the first sentence is something that should hood the reader in. I have ...

You are a really good writer! This is coming along nicely, with the emotions and little cliff hangers you've put in there. Your spelling, grammar and emotions are good. I ...