wonderingkate

Hmm... I kinda agree with the others. I can't tell if I like it or not. I can definitely see grammar and punctuation mistakes, the rhyming didn't flow well ( ...

I really liked this. It makes you think; which is always a good thing. :P Sorry, I don't write poetry, so I can't give you very helpful tips on how ...

Hello, I'm Kate! :D I can tell that you wrote this with a lot of emotion. Great job on that! Putting your emotions into words is never easy. I'm not ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I must tell you that I have not read all the chapters. So, I hope you don't mind if I give you a review anyways! This ...

Hello, I'm Kate! :D I liked how you definitely created a place where I could easily slip into what was going on, and imagine the setting well. Although, in my ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D The YWS member before me covered the grammar pretty well, so I am only going to add my suggestions. I think you have a pretty good ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really liked this. You definitely need to tell your friend that he is a very talented song writer and that he needs to continues to ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D You did an excellent job at capturing my attention. As well as adding the perfect amount of suspense! As silly as it is of me to ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this piece. I have read many romantic fiction stories, and nothing has been quite like this one! I like the fact that ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this. You have a talent for enticing readers! Also, I believe you did a great job delivering the message of what every ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I don't write poetry, and have come to terms that I am not good, so I am not going to critique you. I just must say ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this. You did a great job. I love reading stories that are well done grammatically! If you continue this story, please PM ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really liked this. Also, you are right; this does have a lot of potential. One part of this piece I loved so much is that ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D This was great. You captured me from the very first sentence. I may be the only one, but this definitely was a tear jerker. :( Which ...

Hello, I'm Kate. :D I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you continue. The switch from Olivia to Alec was brilliant! I love it when authors/writers do that! Great ...