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Re: Coloring Outside the Lines (Rewrite History)
Aww man that’s unfortunate! I will say the formatting in the text only version gets messed up a bit, which is why I used an image. :]
Aug 11 -
Re: Coloring Outside the Lines (Rewrite History)
Text Version: You told me years ago that you wanted to bring the word “orgasmic” into everyday conversation, like “this food is—” “that take was—” “you’re looking—” don’t. Yo
Aug 11 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter One: The Farm
LOVED this! I will leave more thoughts when I have the time and energy (which I currently do not) but yes yes, very good!!
Jul 26 -
Re: turn on the bright lights
I'm so glad you liked it! Let me know if I can clarify anything, and I'd love to read any future (or published!!!) versions of this poem, if you'd ever ...
Dec 31, 2025 -
Re: AIO for wanting to break up with my boyfriend because he wont clean up?
LOVE THIS!
Sep 1, 2025 -
Re: Nothing Happens Here: Napoleon Dynamite as a Postmodern Portrait of Working Class Invisibility
This is a GORGEOUS piece of work, and I said, "Mm..." so many times throughout reading it that I lost count. Really brilliant analysis on your part, and you've given ...
Jun 20, 2025 -
Re: angels lie
AHHHHHHH FIG THE UPDATE IS GORGEOUSSSSS. Literally went "ohhhhh my Gadddddddd" as I read the last two lines, chefs kiss, no notes, beautiful, MWAH!
Feb 2, 2025 -
Re: howtomakelovestay
we all crave someone who wants us to linger in the doorway Oh my GODDDDD this is gorgeous. I got chills. I want this to hang on my wall.
Jul 3, 2024 -
Re: sometimes you make people sad
GORGEOUS. Just gorgeous. Wow.
Jul 2, 2024 -
Re: Infatuation
Hey there! I see you're new to the website. Welcome to YWS. :] I just wanted to drop by to say that I think this poem is really sweet and ...
Jun 29, 2024 -
Re: I Swear I’m Straight! (PrideMonth Poem)
*Thud* That was just a coincidence... but hey, I swear I'm straight. This has me SCREAMINGGG laughing, oh my gosh. Great humorous poem, wonderful job!
Jun 28, 2024 -
Re: lve letter frm a brken keybard
Oh my goodness, that%u2019s such a high compliment, especially from someone who skilled and who has so many reviews on their pieces! 0.0 I meant every word of it though! ...
Aug 2, 2023 -
Re: Escapism
This is absolutely breathtaking! I listened to it and my mind is reeling. Amazing writing and delivery
Mar 20, 2023 -
Re: LMS VI: Let Me Live Tonight 1.13
Thank you very much! Apologies, I get anxiety about stuff like that sometimes so I had to check XD thank you very much tho!
Feb 14, 2023 -
Re: LMS VI: Let Me Live Tonight 1.13
That makes perfect sense! Also, no need to apologize! I just wanted to make sure there wasn't some sort of barrier in my writing that was making it difficult for ...
Feb 14, 2023
