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Re: The Atheist Manifesto
Hello, wildwildcat here for your review! For the sake of this review, I shall assume that the work is in no way an exaggeration or a parody, and that you ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Truth and Reconciliation
Hello, wildwildcat here! I saw your honest review on another's work, and was intrigued enough to go give your profile a look-over! So, on to the review of this work: ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: It's Funny, Sometimes
Happy Review Day! wildwildcat here to review your work! This was quite thought-provoking and mind broadening. Your final line is quite great, I applaud you for that bit of awesomeness. ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: A Small Black Marble in a Sea of Glass
I find it wonderful that your story was able to win some distinction. As a whole, I loved your plot, and the characters are people whom I can relate to, ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: 10 Extremely Helpful Tips to Surviving (Most of) High School
These are clear-cut ways to keep organized and focused! Good list! Many of these I knew, but it always pays to see them again! I'm going through high school for ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Heaven From Hell Chapter One
Hello Rydia, I hope this is the right chapter to review! Starting off, your Fact Eight is quite interesting and hints at a system for Guardian Angels. No doubt they'll ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: I had warned you.
Hello Black, wildwildcat here for a review! First, off I was strongly reminded of Robert Frost's quote of "some say the world will end in fire. Some say in ice..." ...
Sep 21, 2013 -
Re: The Other Side of Hell
This was... incredible. The storytelling was spot-on, and the ending had a wonderful revelation for all, with a life message anyone can take to heart. It strung even truer with ...
Sep 19, 2013 -
Re: The Hulk Over Driehel
This story started off fun, and the adding of magic only added to that. (Boy do I love magic!) I have one nitpick that stood out: "They were battling above ...
Sep 18, 2013 -
Re: Anthem Within
Hello! I'm wildwildcat here to review your work! "Natalie groaned, burying her face into her hands. “My mom is going to kill me.” She jumped slightly when she felt [a ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Save Yourself
Hey, it's me, wildwildcat, to engage in a bout of July Christmas reviewing! Your first chapter is awfully short, and it doesn't set much groundwork for the premise. All we ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Fantasy Awakening Chapter 1
Hey Pegasusgirl2, it's wildwildcat here to give you a review on this beginning work on fantasy. First of all, you have a couple verb-tense issues. An example is when the ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: The Silent Man
Wow. The poem gives the impression that the silent man is an outcast, or a misfit. It's powerful, and many people can connect with his situation. The party writhes and ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Helen
Hey, I'm here to give you a review! "An enormous candle white cat leaped over the wall from the neighbouring garden, the pigeon obviously having caught its attention." The previous ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: The System-Prologue
The beginning of the intro hooks me straight into the action, putting me into a different place as events start unfolding. Like others have mentioned, there are a few verb ...
Jul 2, 2013
