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Re: The Painless Grip
Hey there! I will be reviewing your work today! You did great with the poem, you have good words that give the reader a tone that makes them understand the ...
Jan 26, 2013 -
Re: So Long
Hey there! I have to say you did a great job writing this poem. I think your grammar is amazing! (Unlike mine) You did a wonderful job I just have ...
Jan 26, 2013 -
Re: Warsong
Hey there! I will be reviewing your work for today! I do have a few things that I would like to talk to you about. I don't see very much ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: Verdigris
Hey there! I'll be reviewing your work today. Alright I have to say that you had good taste in words for this type of poem but I am having a ...
Dec 13, 2012 -
Re: The Boy
Hey there! I'll be reviewing your wonderful piece of work! :3 Alright, I have to say that you have a lot of emotions within this poem! I am loving it ...
Dec 13, 2012 -
Re: If I wanted to...
Hey there! I'll be reviewing your poem today. :) Oh welcome to YWS. Overall Comments I love your style, you are doing great with your verses flowing into each other. ...
Dec 13, 2012 -
Re: My Vice
Hey there! I'll be reviewing this piece of work today. :) Over all Comments Honestly, this is a good poem. I like it, the way you have written it is ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Nothing Gold Can Stay
Hey there! I will be reviewing your work today. :) Well I have to say that this short story makes me perplexed. I don't understand why magic is important to ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Here We Are
Hey there! I'm going to be reviewing your work today. :) I have to say, I can't really understand your style in the poem. I don't know what to make ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Decieved
Hey there! I'm going to be reviewing your work for today! I have one thing I would like to point out. I don't see any verses through this poem. Personally ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: The wolf that's ready to run
Hey there! I will be reviewing today, and welcome to YWS. Nice to meet you. :) First things first, I would like to talk about some issues I have. "I ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Just A House
Hey there! :3 I'll be reviewing for today. :) Well I have to say, this poem has a lot of emotion within it. I am loving it! I like how ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: A dead Lover
Hey there! I'm Whitewolfpuppy and I will be reviewing. :3 (Oh I do like faces by the way...) I have a BIG issue I would like to talk to you ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Dismal Days
Hey there! I am liking this poem, I like how short and to the point it is! I think you could have added more detail, but that is my opinion. ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Prologue - The Immortal's Assassin
Hey there! Big thumbs up in writing this! I'm reading this at my desk in school and I'm leaning closer to my computer screen as if I'm going to miss ...
Dec 10, 2012
