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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: Cinderella ~ in the Words of a Poem

    Hi. I liked your poem very much. But i think it was very short and minimal. Someone who isn t familiar with the story won t understand your poem. It ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: once upon a time in havana part 2

    hi.tanx for kind comment. may you plz tell me how do you feel about the story?

    Nov 21, 2017
  • Art » Other, General Re: My Profile Picture

    o intresting piece of art.i love its eyes. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but its hair is a bit weird. ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Art » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Eyes

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    so intresting piece of art.i love its eyes. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but its mouth is a bit weird. ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: conspiracy

    hi everybody. i must say something about this piece of work. first of all i am not a native english speaker and maybe that is why you might think i ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: conspiracy

    hi everybody. i must say something about this piece of work. first of all i am not a native english speaker and maybe that is why you might think i ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: once upon a time in havana part 1

    hi everybody. i must say something about this piece of work. first of all i am not a native english speaker and maybe that is why you might think i ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: conspiracy

    hi. tanx for ur kind comment. u must know that i am not a native english speaker. that s why it may seem bad at grammer. anyway tanx again

    Nov 1, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Is There Hope After Failure?

    yes. i think there is always hope after failure. napoleon say every failure is a bridge for a victory.

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Goals

    so true. i wonder why some people bother themselves to find fame. i think the word fame and fortune is itself wrong. because fame doesn t always bring fortune and ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The Outsider

    that is really great word. but i wonder why is it too short? good luck with your poems. i think it is better to write longer ones.

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Today I lost a Friend

    great piece of work. i really loved it.

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: They Are Not Us: A 17th Century American Southerner Defense of Slavery

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    Sep 11, 2017
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Spiritual Re: A Bomb in Oman

    so true so sad . i am sorry to read this . anyway ur realism is ok. i loved ur piece of work. good luck

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Baby Pictures

    lol. so true. to me, seeing babies is sometimes disgusting lol again. anyway good luck

    Sep 11, 2017


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