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Hello sherineahmed, I quite liked this poem. It is not perfect, but it speaks a lot of truth and meaning- which is GREAT! What it lacks however, is structure. You ...

Hello Quibbler, This will be the first piece of work that I have reviewed for you. So I am sorry in advance if I am ever too harsh. I quite ...

Hello Eimear, I really LOVED your poem, as a whole it was great! There is so much emotion and power in there. But I will still go though a few ...

Hey ziggiefred, Love your name- anyway, on to the review. I love your poem from the minute I read the title :). It just caught my eye. I'm not really ...

Hello shiney1, This will be the first review I have done for you, so I would like so say in advance that I am sorry if I am ever too ...

Hey wickedwonder, Wow, I totall agree with KAH! Your poem is amazing I never though a person could write about Mannequin Love in such a a but ou did and ...

Hey asweeney1919, I really liked this poem. I wrote a poem very similar so it is great to find someone who writes poetry like me!! It was short sharp, simple ...

Hello CaptianRandom, There is not a great deal to review because all the others have taken everything to say and I do agree with them... I did not mind this ...

Hi ShaddowSoldier, Um well, I really don't think you should drop this story. What I think you should do is use TIGERSPRITE to correct and change your story to make ...

Hi TheBigCheese, Hahaha. It’s not a poem and it’s not a story so I can't really review it. However I will tell you what needs improving. I do agree with ...

Hi lightningbolt, I really liked this...er... what ever it is! The first thing would be is to put it under something else instead of general fiction novels. Maybe even put ...

Hi LukanRinta, I liked your poem! It was very heart filled and packed with emotion but it that made it even better. It is a good length for a poem. ...

Hi Captain, I really like this short story. I have read the books and I think you have brought an interesting new perspective to how Katniss' father died. You really ...

Hi Kat Jackson, I quite liked your poem! It is good but it could be a bit better. Maybe you could expand on it a bit more. That will make ...

Hi, Snoink, OMG HAHAHAHAHA!!! This is the cutest little poem I have ever read!!!! I absolutely fell in love with it! The concept/ idea is so fantastic, telling the poem ...