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nice one here,lovely rhyme...makes sense,i don't have ant other thing to say,i mean i didn't find any errors in your language...but i didn't feel the poem(maybe because i was in ...

omg!i love your work..jeez!its great,mind blowing..i think i can see the new "danielle my my,you captivated me,i like the concept,the fact that the mother got married early because she thought ...

hahahaha...nice,i love it,laugh out loud...this is cute,you really got me interested with this piece,but what's going to happen next,i mean the fairies,you know i was actually thinking that since the ...

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um..its okay,though i don't get...i actually read this because the title was catching,interesting if you know what i mean,i would agree with what leo said,its more of a prose than ...

nice,cute,wonderful,nice conception,though you made a mistake in the third line,"i try do stand but all control flees"don't you think it should be "i try to stand" i don't know,i'm just ...

you got me scared shitless,this work here is nice but not really that scary like that though i said it scared me shitless,okay,it's good,not that thrilling like that,i actually like ...

awwwwwwwwww.feel like crying,that girl must have suffered pretty bad when her dad was in bad shape,really feel for you know why i like this work?because its a reflection of what ...

wowwwwwwwwwwww,spiritually nice,lol don't mind me,its wow!the bomb,don't know why,but while reading this"pink's true love"came to mind------its wonderful,two sisters once close but due to some factors

UM...this work is great 'kay,i like the concept,its refreshing and well...i couldn't stop looking at it,its great,believe me you,you are definitely a this your first poem?i really don't have much ...

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,cute.though you made some mistakes like"my hair was suck to my face"its supposed to be"my hair was stuck to my face"then in the next paragraph,there was also a mistake there"was ...

cool,i actually like this book,the plot,the setting,the imagination and everything,i think its cool,when the rain falls is also a suitable title,how i wish this book was in paperback then i ...