victoria781

How is this poem? Good, bad? What needs improvement?A shallow puddlenear the middle of the roadThe clouds have now tiredfrom crying so muchThe water lays still,collected:a dent in the asphaltin ...

Took this one down...hated it

Tracing the outline of her face,from a photograph...It's a cloudy dayin the mind of memory.The curve of a foreheadis lost in thick air.Sharpened mountain peakor a rolling hill, gentle;I cannot ...

The stain will not come out.Perhaps I have not tried enoughor really cared to change it.A single drop of red wine;another anniversary.Sipping from a glass of silverin a slimming black ...

Imagine me and youon a ship,on a broken wooden mass;we float.The waves, which tossand turn our hope,would stopand we would findourselves aloneas we, just you and I.Thunder and rain areacross ...

You reduce me; I am so small. Of all things in this worldYou are what breaks meTo this. I am so small.Nothing else;You blind me from it all.I drift from ...

I wrote this 2 years ago. I do see I need to work on punctuation :/ lolA lost stonemoreso, thrown awaygiven a look, a second glance perhapsbefore you walk awaybecause ...