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Ok Grandma, here we go again. But! Before I start, I have decided to make this my 25th review giving me my second star. Wooo! These are usually hard to ...

Hey! Looks like you are gaining popularity! I will start by saying I like the story idea so far. I really do. The story caught my attention and makes me ...

Hi AlyTheBookworm! First of all, Good job! I will try to review a bit and I will try not to repeat a lot of the things Zoom mentioned. (Isn't Zoom ...

Hello there! There are a few things I look for in a story, especially the beginning. 1) The first sentence. It's not boring and it makes you read the second ...

Hey there! So far I like it :) Great story and you have my attention. Why is everything like this? Why does she not remember the past? What will happen ...

Did I just read more while sitting at work pretending to get my work done? Uh, yes! I hate my job. Anyways.. What a sad chapter.. I have thought about ...

Hello there! Saw your new chapter but decided to read the first one instead. 1) I want to start by saying you pulled me in from the beginning. The blog ...

Well well look who has been reading more about Grandma Edna. Another well written chapter. Once again, Grammar is not an area I am good at so nothing about that. ...

Hey! I wanted to say great essay. I am on your side on this topic. I don't understand people who do smoke. Everything is just so bad, yet people want ...

Hey there! Such a sad poem and at the same time touching. Sadly, friends come and go.. I like the part where you would help her on her path. As ...

Hello there! First of all, grammar is not my strongest so no review about grammar. But... The poem is wonderful! I really do love it. The deep meaning about memories ...

Hello again! Let me say that I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I love the comedy that you add to this story. You make it fit so well. I like ...

Hello there :) I'm not much of a critic of grammar but I look for what catches my attention. I thought this was very original! Having an old women chosen ...

Hello there! First thing first, I am no professional lol. What is correct and incorrect is not really something I can help with. What I do is speak my mind ...

Hello BlackGlove! 1) To answer your comment, keep writing! It's never perfect the first time. It takes time and practice. I'm a beginner and that is what I try to ...