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Wow you spent a lot of time on the 'round' part! It is very good, and describes everything very clearly. The only part is that I found it difficult to ...

It is so good! It looks like you spent a lot of time and effort on this part. I am very excited to see what happens next! It hooked me ...

It is really good and got me hooked in right away. It is great. Just be careful of your punctuation, because the second last sentence I had to read over ...

This is amazing! As I read it, my mind painted the scene so clearly. That is how you know it is a great poem. It gives off peace, creativity, and ...

Aww! I am sure they will fall in love :D! Sometimes things like this just happen! Your writing is so original and creative! It is great! I hope you write ...

I love how it is kind of the opposite of the three little pigs. Although, can't the wolves just eat the pig? I want to know the ending, and if ...

It is amazingly realistic. Are you a doctor yourself? Very descriptive. My favorite part was the first sentence and the title. It made me hook up to it immediately. I ...

You certainly write a lot! This story is about love and jealousy, and it is very good. The names you give are creative. I had to use AI to help ...

It is sad and reminds me of how my grandpa died from cancer. I was so small, that I can barely remember. He was in my home country, and we ...

The storyline is very attention-catching and good! I hope you can keep writing. There is lots of descriptive writing. My favorite part is They both didn’t look very rich and ...

It is very interesting and I love the storyline! Is there more, like a series? I would love to know what happens after the Oath. If you wrote that Oath ...