-
Re: Ch-5 The Window, A Face And A Box
It is really good and got me hooked in right away. It is great. Just be careful of your punctuation, because the second last sentence I had to read over ...
Jul 29, 2025 -
Re: Quench for Freedom
This is amazing! As I read it, my mind painted the scene so clearly. That is how you know it is a great poem. It gives off peace, creativity, and ...
Jul 29, 2025 -
Re: Chapter 1 "The B and the Bombshell"
Aww! I am sure they will fall in love :D! Sometimes things like this just happen! Your writing is so original and creative! It is great! I hope you write ...
Jul 29, 2025 -
Re: **********
I love how it is kind of the opposite of the three little pigs. Although, can't the wolves just eat the pig? I want to know the ending, and if ...
Jul 29, 2025 -
Re: room 304
It is amazingly realistic. Are you a doctor yourself? Very descriptive. My favorite part was the first sentence and the title. It made me hook up to it immediately. I ...
Jul 28, 2025 -
Re: Eleanor’s origin: The Laurence family’s deepest woes
You certainly write a lot! This story is about love and jealousy, and it is very good. The names you give are creative. I had to use AI to help ...
Jul 28, 2025 -
Re: Father's Dad
It is sad and reminds me of how my grandpa died from cancer. I was so small, that I can barely remember. He was in my home country, and we ...
Jul 28, 2025 -
Re: 👑🗡️ Queen Clara Albrecht: Paranormal Showgirl 🗡️👑
The storyline is very attention-catching and good! I hope you can keep writing. There is lots of descriptive writing. My favorite part is They both didn’t look very rich and ...
Jul 28, 2025 -
Re: Moon’s origin: Souls and roses 🩰🪻
It is very interesting and I love the storyline! Is there more, like a series? I would love to know what happens after the Oath. If you wrote that Oath ...
Jul 28, 2025