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Thanks for the review! I'll try put more detail into my writing from now on I guess :p I guess I was under the assumption that the other parts of ...

The way to make them easy accessible through one another is by adding them to the same folder when posting. Things in the same folder will show up in the ...

Thanks again haven :) I didn't even notice the food thing, I'll get right on that. But yeah, with the food I was trying to show a miracle happening, as ...

Whoops that came out really bad. Ill see if I can fix it.

Alright, sounds good. Though if you plan on publishing this, creating a religion (even a fictional one) based on whats already been established in another religion tends to lead to ...

Thanks GR, it means a lot. I don't mind it being all over the place as long as you understand the point. I'm glad to see there are still good ...

Thanks for the 'review' Denia :p Glad to know you liked what I wrote, and I appreciate that I was able to surprise you. I was trying to very general ...

Nothing about the paragraphing that won't correct itself with more writing. Just waiting for the next installement to see what happens :p

Ah, it's not perfect but definitely better! Good job.

Thanks ...

I was gonna add plenty more things, but I felt like I would mess up the flow, or it wouldn't make sense, so I just settled for this. But thanks ...

Thanks!

Thanks for the tips! I'll add those next time :p

I absolutely loved this story. I don't know if it's an original myth or not, but thanks for sharing it! Besides the pace moving to quickly in the begging, sounding ...

Thanks for the review! If there were any grammatical or punctual errors when characters were speaking it was done on purpose, but anything was my mistake =x I was pretty ...