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Okay this one should be right. Never mind that last one -_- I walked out the door , and felt a cool fall breeze [as well as] the crunch of ...

Okay, just like I said I would do. Here are all the corrections I could make: I walked out the door , and felt a cool fall breeze [as well ...

Well not much I can say after the other reviews. Besides correcting grammar and spelling (which I'm much too lazy to do), I think the poem is fine. I think ...

Well you're definitely right about one thing, this was very creative :D While I don't have time for a full fledged grammar and spelling review, I didn't notice any major ...

Okay, first things first, an Epilogue goes at the end of a novel, to close the work or sum up the events that happened in the novel. What you were ...

Honestly, I feel like I need an explanation 0.o I couldn't help but wonder what these 'voices' are. Me having the mental problems I do, immediately thought of someone being ...

Puck, despite what your avatar might portray, you're a pretty smart guy. You're also a beautiful writer, but I think that goes without saying. This was one of the few ...

While this was done in a pretty corny way, it is a very interesting idea. A kid growing up into a family of secret agents? Awesome. Actually it's kinda like ...

While this is a nice piece, I'm not sure why it's classified under poetry. I guess you could say it has a 'poetic feel', but it's not real a straightforward ...

I guess everyone likes some dark humor once in a while. If I have to say anything about this story, it has to be that I never got bored the ...

Hm.

This is a beautiful piece of writing. It's a nice perspective on church, and it's told from a nice point of view. While some people could take this the wrong ...

Well this is just great! It's an awesome idea for a dystopian future. Beside the few grammatical errors, I thought it was very easy to read. It wasn't boring or ...

Despite what other people might think, I thought this was absolutely beautiful. I could tell it was written with emotions that were absolutely genuine, a type of writing that could ...

A little back story would be nice if you don't plan on continuing this. While this seems interesting, I feel likes its a bit poorly written. Though not so bad ...