unknownlover347

FIrst off, I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading this poem. It seemed like a well description of a demon and how its existence brings destruction and death to ...

Correct me if I'm wrong, but for some reason, I feel as if the poem is supposed to be about how blind people are, making their minds clouded and rained ...

I'd have to say, with such a touchy subject and with the memorial coming up for 9/11, I'd have to say this was a beautiful story that captured what happened ...

You have me tear-filled. More like just straight up crying from this poem because I've gone through that kind of betrayal with a friend and I did the same thing. ...

I like this lol If only I knew how it would sound, then I could give this a better critique. Is there anyway you can post music for this on ...

Let me first say Bravo! I thought this was a beautiful poem. Reminds me of a poem I did, but this is way better and more detailed. :D Going Crazy ...

Why do you feel the need to tear me up Into pieces so small Little parts of me i'll never get back Lies, that glossed over it all Now, after ...

I agree with what the previous commenters have said. I think that if you were to make it a little bit more detailed and a few lines longer, it would ...

The story over-all seemed to be quite interesting. The only constructive criticism I have is the changing of verb tenses within the story from past to present. For example: I ...

I think that the general message about Life was given to the readers. However, as stated at the very end of your post, it was a bit confusing and may ...

Is this song meant to be a poem? It seems like a poem from the way that I'm reading it. I like the repetition of that one line When I'm ...

I fell in love with this poem! The imagery you had with the "towering flames". The repetition at the end, "I am here, I am here, I am here". I ...