ultraviolet

Hi! Here to review as requested. :) I'm probably just being daft, but why is Alexander called the third man? Wouldn't he only be a second man, unless there's another ...

This piece was kind of confusing to me. Just then the elevator screeched to a halt. I looked around nervously, wondering what happened. Nothing seemed to be wrong. But for ...

I'm not sure I can really give this a serious review. But, as a Twilight-hater, I love this. :D Like, love this. Bella screeched to Stephenie from another room, “Get ...

Hi! Okay, so first off, this is amazing. I'm gonna take all the previous comments on just how awesome and well-written this is and combine them all in one huge ...

Awe. Some. XD Just for the heck of it, I'm going to nitpick (because I feels like it). I would sift through the internet for you, Get rid of the ...

'Ello, ultraviolet here! Because I like numbering things so well (I really do :P ) that's what I'll do here. 1. Okay, so putting a real person -- especially one ...

Hiya! Nice to see you away from the Welcome Mat, out and about, posting your work, all that great stuff. :D First off, I believe this is a novel. It ...

Concept I like the concept here, especially at the end. You give us a new view of unrequited love. Not only does she want him, though she may not even ...

'Ello, ultraviolet here! I have several points to make, so I shall number them (I like numbering things. XD ). 1. The Prologue. Amazing. It hooked me right away. In ...

Hi! So, I've never seen LOST, but this poem is simple and vague enough that it can apply to a lot of people. I like the short, sweet stanzas, how ...

Hi! I have but one little nitpick. Shining like a lake in the moonlight Keys glinting under artificial light You repeat "light." I'd suggest finding a synonym for one of ...

Here to review as requested! The scratch of a biro Excuse me, but what is a biro? I don't know if this is a misspelling or I am simply too ...

Here to review as requested! This has come vivid detail and nice descriptions. I like the flow too. One thing I noticed, though, is that it was a bit hard ...

Hi! The Song I'm actually quite a big Taylor Swift fan and know this song well. It works well with it, goes off of it nicely. My only thing -- ...

Hi! ultraviolet here! Okay, so for the most part, I like this. There are a couple of flow-breaking lines I've found, though. Fire. I convulse as it pounds. Can I ...