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I've been writing this on my ipad, which is the reason I have typoes. Smally is not a word. I don't know what I was trying to write there. The ...

The section that you pulled out with Kai "speaking" was her thoughts. That's why they're in italics.

Remember that Kurin is not only the goddess of festivals, but the goddess of strength. ;) I've been writing on the road. Thanks for catching my typos

More spoiler. Sorry that I got to your other review before this one. Sera is not actually Queen. She's a princess. You'll see why later. I decided not to spoil.

Thank you so very much for your review! I'll fix things accordingly. As to your curiosity about the "limelight" issue (this will be addressed in later chapters), the "Queen" and ...

The storyline will connect shortly. The chapter I'm working on now does not have a "past" half, and neither will any thereafter. As for the Guides, we find out their ...

This poem was supposed to be a joke, and I didn't write it. It was a product of a really boring class. It's not supposed to be taken seriously. Just ...

I wouldn't mind updating you at all and I'll definitely join the Fairy Tale Campfire.

Thank you for your review~! While I disagree with a few of your comments for the sake of voice, I will definitely make the other changes. Thank you!!

The Carpenter lifted more of his own weight. The girl was the first Child of the Mist. She probably dealt with a lot of nasty things from being in the ...

It's fine!! Don't feel bad!! If it weren't what I was going for, your review would have helped a lot more than it did. It was a great review.

The only reason why these past chapters lack dialogue is because it's not really necessary and the story telling is supposed to be similar to myths or folk tales. But ...

Thank you so much!! Just as a reference, time flows differently in the first half of the chapters. Osorezu has been wandering for days, weeks, months, ... The time frames ...

I hope that that wasn't a review. :/

I described the rock about the door as an awning. This is supposed to invoke the idea that the platform is a porch. Normally, a porch leads inside of a ...