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I have yet to read any of this and I can already tell you that your paragraphs are far too long. Remember that you need to separate paragraphs when a ...

I unfortunately admit that I only skimmed this. The paragraphs are far too large for me to quickly read. Also, I spotted a massive paragraph that needs to dealt with. ...

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MY GOD I CAN'T Excuse my Tumblr heavy comment there. This is an amazing piece of writing! If you don't mind, I'm going to ...

I was caught immediately by the title+57 Sorry. My hand slipped and it was too good to delete. Anyway, I was caught by the title, but as I kept reading, ...

This was a very moving piece of poetry. The rhyming really helped to solidify it and it drew in my attention pretty quickly. I'm a big fan of rhyming after ...

OnO Whoa. Whoa. I'm sitting here speechless. I just.. Whoa. That was pretty deep there, man. I don't know how to better congratulate you for this other than to say, ...

This is a very beautiful poem and I was mesmerized while I read it. It is absolutely beautiful, however, there are a few structural issues. You should probably run over ...

I love this story, but I'm slightly disappointed with how this ended. If this is only going to be a two part series, what happened to the other ten days? ...

I am in love with this story so far and I'm absolutely enchanted. I can't wait to read the second part (and I'm glad that I don't have to wait ...

I was at the edge of my seat for the entire story. It was gripping and thrilling, albeit sad. It certainly keeps the reader asking, "does she/he die?", which just ...

I really enjoyed this poem! It was rich with imagery and I always had a beautiful, yet ghastly and grim picture in my head. Thank you for this beautiful piece. ...

This was a very descriptive, very enchanting story that you've written. I was spellbound for the entire read. Congratulations on a beautiful piece of writing, as well as bless you ...

This was a wonderfully, horribly sad piece. I loved every moment of it. What makes it just a bit more sad is the fact that I'm in a church at ...

This story absolutely broke my heart, and I could feel tears welling in my eyes the entire time. It's a very beautiful story, telling a realistic story of a family ...

I was speechless as I read this. It tugged at my heart strings in a way that I can't begin to describe. This was a fantastically emotional piece. What makes ...