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This was an absolutely beautiful poem, with a great message. Heartbreak and injustice and abuse is difficult to deal with, but you illustrated it in such a beautiful way. You've ...

I was not expecting the ending at all! I honestly cracked up so bad that my mom got concerned! The narrator is so raunchy and concise that humour just leaked ...

Hello! Ulala here for a quick review. In the opening paragraph, you use ellipses pretty liberally. I’m a little... confused. Did Juno... visit... me? Juno... blind, pretty, smart, funny... love... ...

Let me just start by saying a few most likely unwanted things. This is too long in my opinion. I'm not saying to cut down on the actual story, but ...

This was a very interesting poem. The metre was strange and the rhythm of each line was different, but the story kept me with it. I feel like this is ...

With every new reader, there will be new punctuation that they unintentionally insert which will give the poem a certain meaning. For each reader it'll be a different meaning, so ...

Hello! Ulala here for a review! First off, I have to say that the prologue was very nice and it definitely has me hooked on reading more of it. As ...

When it comes to haiku, I rarely have much to say about them-- be it good or bad. This poem, however, captured something aesthetic that I can barely put into ...

Hello! Ulala here for a review! Let me just start off by saying that the imagery of this second sentence was absolutely gorgeous! I love your word choice! "The sun ...

Hello! Ulala here with a review! To start off, I noticed that this line was a bit repetitive; "They sagged down as she let out a heavy sigh. She took ...

Hello~ To start off, I liked your story a lot. It was rather charming and I enjoyed the viking feel. It was rather grim, but also rather enchanting to read. ...

I really really really really like this poem, sis. It was so great. From the very first line, I was hooked. It flowed very nicely and I really enjoyed your ...

I enjoyed this poem. It's definitely not your best and it doesn't really seem to have your spark, but the message was really touching and I enjoyed reading it. However, ...

I agree wholeheartedly with GreenTulip. I'm sorry. I didn't like your story very much. "...looks like a cooked up fantasy book by an amateur writer." I think that you should ...

I enjoyed this story quite a lot! It's the first in a long time to capture and keep my attention for the entire story! I love that this also warns ...