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Re: Playing with faults
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Jun 9, 2016
I really enjoyed this poem! I think the fact that you only capitalized the beginning of an actual sentence was nice. Just at the end "I scoop up the ashes ... -
Re: Playing with faults
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Jun 9, 2016
I really enjoyed this poem! I think the fact that you only capitalized the beginning of an actual sentence was nice. Just at the end "I scoop up the ashes ... - Re: Storm Jun 8, 2016
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Re: Things Which Are Seen
Oh my goodness I think this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Of all time. You must be an incredible writer!!! I am not Christian - I'm ...
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Re: Reality
Written really well; gives a dark, deep perspective on life. I'm sorry you're in so much pain :( but I can definitely relate to every word! Good luck and write ...
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Re: Jet Lag
My favorite line is the last one - "The glow of his computer screen becomes the sun of his day". It works perfectly, and it helps describe some of the ...
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Re: Jet Lag
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Jun 8, 2016