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I like this, i really like this. It's a nice short little poem about life and it's pretty good for it's length. I like the way you were able to ...

This is unfinished and I haven't proofread but I don't know how to delete this

No problem lol

Um thank you for the review. Just so you know my views on religion, death, society and just about everything in this story is almost completely nonexistent I just wrote ...

As you can see I toke a little break from slit so I can work on other things

Well thank you the review. and to answer the second question as a Feline crossbreed Ryan has strong sense of smell and can detect where normal people and crossbreeds are ...

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I was finally able to finish this. I didn't really have time to proof read this so there's probably grammatical and spelling errors here and there

oh wow thank you from the review :)

well thank you for the review, I'm glad to see that I'm improving.

Alright thanks for the advice

oh no you weren't to harsh at all, thank you for the help. I'll try and use what you said in writing the next part. Thanks for the help :)