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Re: A Poem about Old Friends and First Times
The grammar stuff is just a personal preference. I don't like to worry about punctuation and the like while I'm writing poetry. I'm just confused on why you said that ...
Dec 18, 2016 -
Re: A Poem about Old Friends and First Times
I appreciate the critique, good things and bad. Question: 1. How do i insert stanzas? I tried just inserting blank lines when i submitted it, but it apparently takes it ...
Dec 18, 2016 -
Re: Misty Seas
I just saw that you were only 13. That's impressive. You don't usually poems like this written from 13 years olds. Make sure you keep challenging yourself. Don't stagnate. Write ...
Dec 18, 2016 - Re: opposite Dec 18, 2016
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Re: opposite
speaking aesthetically, especially in poetry, there's no correct way to do anything. If changing the spelling of a word works better, then do it.
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: Oh to Be Married
I couldn't say i liked the story, maybe the humor wasn't directly up my alley. But it was written fairly well.
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Takng Life
A lot of people confuse being grammar Nazis with writing a review. That being said, did you even look at what you wrote before you submitted it? If you going ...
Nov 16, 2014 - Re: Takng Life Nov 16, 2014
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Re: Burrow.7.
>His feet slowly stepped back, his hands felt the coldness of the walls as he backed up shocked. This is a run-on sentence. Some awkward word repetition and order here. ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Why Micky?
If you would have finished it, you would know what parts are INTENDED to be funny.
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: Slice part 2 (not completed but please still review)
anytime sugar
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: The story has just begun
>Lucy was beyond ready to leave her bodunk town of Sarelton Alabama and travel across the country to sunny California with Saul, her discheveled, absolutely adorable, clumsy, train wreck of ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: The Open Window
>I rip the blanket off of my body suddenly, grab the pan, and hit the monster across the head with it several times. Take 'suddenly' out of this sentence. The ...
Nov 3, 2014
