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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Poem about Old Friends and First Times

    The grammar stuff is just a personal preference. I don't like to worry about punctuation and the like while I'm writing poetry. I'm just confused on why you said that ...

    Dec 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Poem about Old Friends and First Times

    I appreciate the critique, good things and bad. Question: 1. How do i insert stanzas? I tried just inserting blank lines when i submitted it, but it apparently takes it ...

    Dec 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: Misty Seas

    I just saw that you were only 13. That's impressive. You don't usually poems like this written from 13 years olds. Make sure you keep challenging yourself. Don't stagnate. Write ...

    Dec 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: opposite

    Dec 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: opposite

    speaking aesthetically, especially in poetry, there's no correct way to do anything. If changing the spelling of a word works better, then do it.

    Dec 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Oh to Be Married

    I couldn't say i liked the story, maybe the humor wasn't directly up my alley. But it was written fairly well.

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Takng Life

    A lot of people confuse being grammar Nazis with writing a review. That being said, did you even look at what you wrote before you submitted it? If you going ...

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Takng Life

    Nov 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Burrow.7.

    >His feet slowly stepped back, his hands felt the coldness of the walls as he backed up shocked. This is a run-on sentence. Some awkward word repetition and order here. ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: Why Micky?

    If you would have finished it, you would know what parts are INTENDED to be funny.

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Slice part 2 (not completed but please still review)

    anytime sugar

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The story has just begun

    >Lucy was beyond ready to leave her bodunk town of Sarelton Alabama and travel across the country to sunny California with Saul, her discheveled, absolutely adorable, clumsy, train wreck of ...

    Nov 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: The Open Window

    >I rip the blanket off of my body suddenly, grab the pan, and hit the monster across the head with it several times. Take 'suddenly' out of this sentence. The ...

    Nov 3, 2014


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— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince