torsa_n_muse

i know this ones a discouragingly long piece, but give it a try. it wont bore you to at least write if you thought this was good or bad! -torsa

loser's defence was an experimental effort and feels like it didnt work too well. but thanks for your take on this poem, criticism like this definitely helps! :) -torsa

thank you for your criticism. i have got rid of some of the 'the' in stanza one and yes i realise it sounds better. thank you again! :D -torsa

hi angel, thank you for your compliments. truly excited when someone likes this poem! -torsa

:) thanks for all your comments. i will keep the critcism in my mind, when i write a new poem. -torsa

i am happy to get such aesome response from you all. i am really thrilled. i have not been able to catch up with all the response for some time, ...

it was wonderful to know thatb you people liked this one. actually this poem is very close to my heart.

hey, thanks for your comment. it took sometime for me to reply to this one, but i am happy that you liked this one! :)

hi, thanx for reading it, but when are your comments comin? :?

guys, i really wanted you all to comment on this one, coz i wrote this stuff on line and wanted to know how you feel about this! write something, even ...

its a good attempt and was a plain nice read, that i liked. so keep writing! cheers, torsa

hi, its nice when your poem is read by so many people and even better when they criticise it. it helps you assess how much you have been able tio ...

hi, well i will take care henceforth to make the story more clear for a reader. actually i wanted to keep the lead girl anonymous because i felt her ordinary ...

thanx for all your comments. i will keep the criticism in my mind when writing a new poem. :D torsa

thanks for your appreciations and criticisms! i think its awesome to hear so many differrent comments from all of you! people have differrent takes on the same thing and that ...