tori1234

Hey, I really liked that. It had a very nice balance of longing and youthful innocence. And getting that balance is hard to do sometimes. So congratulations on that! When ...

wow, I really liked that I see what you mean about the naked white paper "daring" you to write. It's like it's just sitting there, staring you in the face, ...

Wow, I'm so sorry. Have you told your mom yet? You really need to. I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Wow, that was really nice. I didn't like the part when you said "whore", but besides that, it's just lovely. I finally beginning to understand what my best guy friend ...

Um....I don't really know what to say to that. I'm going to come right out and say it, I didn't like it. I'm sorry, it's just not my type of ...

Hmmm.... I liked it. Do you think you could make it a little bit longer? Not much longer, just a little bit. I liked how it was SSSTTP (Short, Sweet, ...

I really liked that. Very nice. I do have one suggestion though. In your first stanza, you use the word "warm" twice. The first time to describe the mountain breeze ...

I actually really liked it. I just have a couple of problems, i think it lacks emotion. You are telling me about all this pain, now you just need to ...

If you like romance I have the best book for you! It is called Redeeming Love by Francine Rivers . I laughed, I cried, and I did everything else in ...

Oh my gosh, that was SO wonderful! It reminds me so much of what goes through my head constantly. There is so much meaning in this poem, all hidden underneath ...

Wow. I'm not sure what your meaning behind this was, but I have found my own meaning. They way I see it, this poem describes life. All your demons come ...

That was very nice. I so know what you mean about being a terrible writer! And the way your poem just flowed, it was fantastic! This is like something my ...

Very nice, I was going to yell at you for making fun of New Moon(my favorite book in the Twilight Series) but this is pretty fun. My favorite part was ...