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Hi there! The way you began the poem is beautiful and creating a mystery about your lover.I love the way u talk about her beauty and her chestnut brown skin.The ...

Thanks:-)

Hey nire. .. well thanks for an honest review. .. as u see I have reviewed my story and made some changes which u felt inappropriate.Ti have changed the story ...

ppl like u make this community better.. i appreciate your work and hope to get more from u in future

of course i wl read tat.... nd give my reviews... keep writing... nd could u do me a favour... i have written a poem on teenage could u plz check ...

my pleasure,,,keep writing

it is a well written peice for sure ...u hv done it well bt there are few things you should keep in mind.... the choice of words are not that ...

awesome poem... but at times it becomes dull and boring like in the lines"time and distance...high praises"... u could have written it in a more efficient way....but otherwise wonderful art... ...

thanks sir for your kind words and for review... i will surely try to improve next time

thnx fr reading