tinkembell

I loved it! I know there's not much to review, but it IS a haiku. I think there is good imagery in there, and I really liked how you made ...

Wow, I really loved this poem ^_^ it was delicate, sad, yet... I didn't really know what it was about, which was great. :) A bit of critique-yness: The canvas, ...

Well, I really liked this poem, the message comes across very clearly, however I agree with Lava and perdido, it is a bit 'preachy' and 'lecture-y' I think what they ...

First off, welcome to YWS! Wow, I really loved this poem, there's some great imagery and it left me with a warm fuzzy sort of feeling, what I would suggest ...

First off, welcome to YWS! ^_^ I thought this poem was very good, it kept my interest and had a story to tell. The theme really drew me in, I'm ...

woah ehte, you have so many review already *asks self if she should even be here* okay, I'm gonna review anyway (I should of been faster, I guess I'm just ...

Wow, very impressive xD I'm not familiar with the story myself, but I thought this was very good, and I don't think it mattered. It was a little short - ...

[First off I really liked this and I think the imagery and the atmosphere you created was brilliant. As poetry it's broken but that's what makes me love it, it ...

sweet Tinkem here as requested :D First off, my general impression - I loved it, it was really sweet and... hmm succint :) I kinda have a problem with the ...

WOAH, this is long. :) when I said no novels do you think this could sneakily bypass for an extra long short story? Could you please, oh I don't know, ...

back for some srange reason, I see you didn't take any of my advice :( it's kinda sad but... ho hum, it's up to you. Anyway, you changed amigo to ...

Here as requested :P Wow, very imressive :D Like others sort of said because it's so blunt, it's unemotional, but at the same time very impressive cause I'm not crying ...

Wow, I really liked this :) the idea was really cute and moving. I agree with stargazer though; it would be better in non-fiction. Here are a few nitpicks; Our ...

Wow, really good :) and welcomish to YWS by the way. just a few nitpicks; Where the words are written but left un spoken , w here you can speak ...

haha, you're thirteen but you rated it sixteen? :) Was it because of the swearing, it was only one word so it's okay to drop it down to a fifteen ...