tigershark17

Oh duh... yes *scary* Thanks for the review! (:

Oh, wow. I was really really touched by this poem; it is so deep. You did such a good job in the way you expressed the emotions of what you ...

Wow! I really felt this poem; this is really deep. I really enjoyed it!

Thanks guys! In answer to your question, preachergirl: that would be telling! But if you really want to know, you can pm me (:

Stori: in a good or bad way?

Wow guys! Thank you so much for the comments! I had no idea this would help or be liked so much!!!

Haven't seen it yet; that's why I was asking.

Thanks so much, Ziggie! I will edit soon

Wowee! I can't believe there's only one review! I don't have much to say; I didn't really see any mistakes. Nice imagery and detail, good flow and rhythm. I loved ...

This is great! Your detail is really really good. You literally created pictures in my mind as I read. Excellent job!

Hi! Okay, first, what's with the underscores??? (in the title, that is) I really like the imagery you use in this; your descriptions are excellent. This is great! Keep up ...

Hey! This is cool! Soccer? That was just awesome the way you kinda left us hanging and then hit us with it at the end. Great job; this was a ...

This is a really intriguing poem. It is written like a letter, which makes it different but very interesting to read. Anyway, I didn't really see any nitpicks, so great ...

Yes, I did try to like it more than once, seriously. I would have given it like ten. So ten gold stars for you! And I know what you mean ...

Oops, sorry; forgot to give you a score for conventions. That would be a 5. Good job (again) TS