tigershark17

Ranger51, This is awesome! Okay, so I review with the six traits system, so basically I tell you what I thought about your writing for each trait, and then give ...

Whoa! Wasn't quite prepared for that ending! OKay, well, let's get started. I review using the six traits system, so basically I will list the six traits and how well ...

Hey! I started my review for part tow before this, so if you don't get the whold six traits thing, go look at that one first. Ideas: Clear, focused, compelling, ...

Hey there! I like the first poem better. The descriptions are great, your wording is fantastic. As for the second poem: Reflecting are my imperfections this line seems a little ...

Wow! That's heavy stuff. I love it though. You have a choppy style, but you've definitely been able to use that to your advantage. Great job on that! Love your ...

Serious grammatical errrors. They are very distracting. HOwever, that being said, this is an excellent idea so far, and if you work a bit at showing rather than telling, it ...

This is great! Just like your prologue, I sincerely enjoyed this. I hope you finish it someday. It has a serious potential for being published. Really. All it needs is ...

This is AWESOME!!! I loved the beginning; it really drew me in. Your plot kept me reading right until the very end. Your voice was excellent: very unique and passionate, ...

Hmmm.... intriguing.... *wiggles brows* This was a very interesting poem. Very different, and it had a really unique style. One mispelled word in the beginning, and please don't write things ...

Wow. This is a very different and unique poem, but I really liked it! I really like the fact that you don't use much punctuation. Cour'se, I'm biased; I don't ...

Whoa. OKay, I am now a little obsessed with your writing. This is cool! I mean, hey, I know it's just a little thing based on your avvie, but man, ...

Awesome! I'm really starting to love poetry after reading some of these works. This is great. It doesn't seem that vague to me, so yeah, good job on that. Anyways, ...

This is great! I love that it's to your English teacher, by the way. A lot of teachers seem to judge all kids based on sterotypes, and it's really annoying. ...

Hey First off, I just wanted to say, I am so glad you didn't use pinctuation! I don't use it in mine either, and got a lot of people telling ...

Hey boss! I use the six traits system to review, which just basically means I list the six traits and what I thought of your writing for each, and then ...