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Re: Rippling waters, singing skies
I stand at the ocean's edge, taking in the beautiful glow of the sun upon the cold waters, but I am not here for the view. This is a very ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Penguins & Peacocks
If you could choose to meet a penguin or a peacock, which would you choose? Probably a penguin. They're more interesting than peacocks to me x_x My mom is making ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Late Bloom- Prologue
World War III had ravaged the world, fifty years ago. No one was ready for the disaster and despair it caused. But in the end, America won the war. However, ...
Sep 26, 2015 -
Re: Learning to Breathe Without Lungs
This is a touching, emotional story that does adequate to capture the feelings of a young cancer patient. The word choice is strong and shows that you're a powerful writer. ...
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: Finally
In kindergarten I did have a friend, one. I don't even remember her name, but I do remember her other friend. That strikes me as weird they'd forget a name. ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: The Only Way Out
It's happening again... That thing. It always happens on the nights. It's cold and windy and I can barely see anything other than a little clarity at the open end ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: A Product Of Circumstances!
I stand in the balcony, where the strong winds are bracing me. After such a long time, I can feel the cool-peaceful mind. Somehow all the disturbance and agitation has ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Mistakes Were Meant To Be Made
Well, this sure was...something x_x Let's start at the top. It's been a year. And everything has changed. Absolutely everything. "Why are you doing this?" "We are you best friends!" ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: The Fallen Princess [Part 2]
So it's been a little while since I read and reviewed the first part to this. Sorry if I get any plot elements wrong ._. Shendelzare watched as Hereseyr came ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: The Unsinkable Disaster-Chapter Two
The Titanic was the biggest and best ship I had ever seen. The paint was an onyx black that shone. It glided across the water as smoothly as a swan. ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: The Unsinkable Disaster
I like The Titanic so I'm going to review this even though its old. shrug. At the time that it had happened, I had been in the library. Sleep had ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: The Dragon and the Dragon Slayer
Once upon a time, there was a dragon and a dragon slayer who- Actually, no. Let me start over. Once upon a time, there was a dragon slayer who was ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: His Name Is Andrew.
I ran down the corridor, chasing the mass of people in front of me. "Chasing" is an odd word choice here. Because if presumably, the main character is trying to ...
Sep 20, 2015 -
Re: Photographs Are Worth More Than A Thousand Words If You Look At Them The Right Way
Alright, here's my actual review for you. "How many times have I asked you not to leave the window open?" you shout at the now angry boy in front of ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.2]
Scarlet and I waited for Imran to come in front of the school gate. It was two forty-five in the evening and the sun was scorching. I felt like getting ...
Sep 18, 2015
