tigeraye

hello. Jumping into this half-way through, plotwise I was a bit lost at both the setting and what was going on. This chapter, in essence, was nothing but a bunch ...

A few clouds rolled over the sun as I walked through the streets of the city. These were the nicer parts The first thing I noticed as soon as I ...

hello. Having jumped in to review this without reading any other chapters yet, I was still able to notice that this was really well written overall. You have a solid ...

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO You used the wrong FEET Cecilia stretched her fingers, then her arms, legs and feat. I cannot review something ...

hello. So I'm going through the back section of green room stories to review the works that have been without reviews for longest and came upon yours. I don't know ...

Hello. In this chapter, you retain your good sense of connection with the reader, while your overall style and grammar only got better. For just being uploaded a week apart, ...

hello. I saw your other chapter in the green room and thought I'd review it, but I decided to read this first to get a better understanding of what it's ...

Hello again. The stuff I said in regards to your actual writing remains true in this chapter as it did in the last, so I'll just get right to the ...

Hello. I saw the second chapter in the green room and decided to read this before, so this will be ultimately a quick review with some initial thoughts. One thing ...

hello. Let me start by saying I like that you gave a recap at the start of the chapter, might start doing that myself! Haven't ready any of your chapters ...

hello. I have to admit, jumping into review this without reading any of the other chapters left me a bit lost at the setting and plot, but there was a ...

Ah, this is getting deep. So in this chapter, we learn that Michelle is an atheist, but she tries to go to church regardless. I'd imagine it would be tough ...

Yeah, so I sort of figured where this was headed, but I didn't see Michelle getting the decision. With this story ending up as tragic as it has been, I ...

hello, I'm back! You said Dirty Streets was your strongest work, right? haha, then I'll get to reading it after I finish this series. I guess we all have our ...

hello. Unfortunately I haven't read any other parts to your story, but I'm here to save you from the green room after two months anyway. Now, I'm not a fan ...