tigeraye

Sorry, but this is really not that great. The grammar and formatting mistakes alone make it nearly make this pretty tough to read -- I'd check out more stories from ...

One thing I think I can say about this piece of writing is that it's pretty memorable, in part to how different others might interpret it. I'm sure you have ...

I'm going to tell you right away that if you want more people to read your stuff, you're going to have to split up that opening paragraph. Most anyone who ...

Right away I could tell this was going to be a good piece, just because the dialogue came off as so genuine. I think one of the more difficult things ...

I'm a sucker for any story that deals in thanatology, and this is no exception -- I really enjoyed it. It contains a certain morbidness to it, a certain darkness ...

You have a nice voice to your writing...the narration here has a certain "charisma" if that makes any sense. Not a lot of people have that, it's something really special ...

This is an interesting story. I'm not sure I've ever read anything quite like it, and that's a good thing. I like how the narrator is an actual character in ...

I really liked this chapter. The intense emotion and detail you have is very invigorating. Lexi is a very interesting character -- she's almost a sociopath, but maybe not quite. ...

I'd like to say that I find your writing to be quite enjoyable -- this story proves to be pretty immersive and the concept proves interesting. You have a great ...

Wow, this is a powerful story. Its intense, gripping, moving, and inhumanely violent all at the same time. It's propelled by a very interesting plot, and carried by wickedly strong ...

This is pretty good -- I think like already said, it's something a lot of girls can relate to, but not just girls, boys can be cheated on, too. The ...

This is really beautiful writing -- you characterize senses and imagery in a vivid, imaginative, and descriptive way to make the reader feel like they are actually in the world ...

I think this is very poetic. A lot of people, I think could benefit a lot from using sensory detail to make the reader feel like they're more a part ...

I think it’s a shame that this has gone review-less for as long as it has, as I really did enjoy reading it. There isn’t a lot of strong character ...

I think what makes your stories stand out from others is that they always have a nice grittiness to them, not overly so but it's always there, and it always ...