threm.

If all the trivialities in the world were added up, they would outnumber the stars; indifferent and solitary, observed as a congregation of unimportance. I don't quite get the connection ...

Awesome, just pure and utter awesomeness. The words are flowing through my head, As I try to recall what they've said, And even though 'they've' and 'they have' is the ...

When all is said and done, who can say they've won? who can say they've truly won? But they weren ' t there, in the fight. The brutal things you've ...

Memories flash through my head in a blur While hurt fills my broken heart Tears stream down my forlorn face And depression is slowly wearing my body down How can ...

Intertwine is one word right? :) I love the way you look at me, and the way your eyes always find mine. I love the way I fit in your ...

Love’s risk It starts with a smile Then grows to a kiss Traveling miles, To feel true bliss. People fantasize, Of rare true love ...that never dies I think I ...

I always stare at you, when you're not looking. and this is a bit stalker-ish. :) Laughing, or talking when you walk by. Hoping that maybe you'll notice me, the ...

My suggestion for you is not use so complex words... sometimes it's effective. Oftentimes, it lessens the appeal of the poetry. But nonetheless, as a whole, your poetry is good. ...

this is good... but of course, it could be better. Some parts are a little confusing to me. haha. maybe it's my brain that's not functioning. :) -threm.