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I don't think there is enough detail in this to be a poem. Plus, it needs more words. I would scarp it. Sorry.

It was quite nice, I liked the ryming and it does bring out your emotion. Nice Job.

You could really feel the emotion in it. Nice job.

Thanks for your reviews.

Well, it does seems that some guys are like that but some like the personality that people have. Anyway, it was nice poem. And, I hope you find someone some ...

I found this be a interesting poem. Plus, it seems that you picked to talk about something people usually don't write about making it more interesting.

This poem of your seems to better than the other ones I read and I can relate to it. You should probably capiltilize the I's though.

I'm not sure what to make of this. I mean what's the direction you're trying to go? I understand the message. But, what's the point?

Thanks Jabby.

I never knew you were gansta. :smt005 Anyway, that was a cool song.

:smt089 That was quite depressing. I think there was only one thing I would change but otherwise it was good.

I thought it was interesting how it gives a sense of mistery.

:smt089 That's about all I can say.

Yay! I actually understood what this poem was about. I can't say that for some poems. Anyway, I liked it.

Your English is quite good. You do have a few grammar errors though. I suggest that you have someone edit it before posting. Plus, that will help with your English ...