Published June 14, 2008
Two angels on the edge of the world.
One am I. One is dead.
One angel on the edge of the world.
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Two angels on the edge of the world.
One I am. One is dead.
One angel on the edge of the world.
I like the meaning.
But, it's wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
too short.
Expand upon it.
Have fun with it.
Explore your writerexuality.
And, yes, I just made that word up.
Whoa. Um, was that short or was that short?
I would suggest lengthening it, or starting from scratch with the same...theme...I guess.
I love poems about Angels, especially pretty ones, so edit this, maybe, and repost it. Or try again!
Grandiosely,
Lily
I don't think there is enough detail in this to be a poem. Plus, it needs more words. I would scarp it. Sorry.