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I like the point that you're trying to make. Discrimination is an evil thing. People need to be given a chance instead of being shunned from the beginning. Also, I ...

Wow, they was so much emotion in there it makes you want to cry. I think this is one of the best stories I read so far. I wish I ...

I thought that it was a good poem their was a sence of mystery trying to find out what she was doing and what was happending. It was quite sad ...

I like the thought you put into this poem and the emotion that you carry with it. It really shows throughout the poem. I don't think I saw anything that ...

I find it interesting that you talk about how it's important to remain happy and to have hope even when things look bad it gives the poem or whatever you ...

Yeah, there are some errors in there like every one should be everyone and there's a place where you forgot to capitalize the I when referring to yourself. I think ...

I can see how Dyslexia ties into it and I like how you describe things. The only thing I saw was that my self should be myself. Do you actually ...

I thought it was somewhat corny. I think you should scap it and start over. Plus, think about what the people are saying doesn't it sound funny to you. And ...

I am so sorry that this happened to you. Ray was a horrible person to have done that. My friend said that he suffered some sexual abuse at school also. ...

Damn! That was good, I usually don't see stories that make that much of an impact on people. I like the girl finally found love. I think you should write ...

It reminds me of the school shootings. You seemed to use some words to frequently. Plus, it seemed kid of emtionless. But, it did leave people thinking although, I'm, not ...

I would go back and edit it. Also, I think this would be rated R or at lest pg-13 due to the nudity and sex in it. I also don't ...

I can feel some of the hate but I think it would be better if you showed us why you are so repuled by yourself. Why does thee hate yourself ...

I just noticed that I'm the only guy that read this so far. lol Anyway, it was interesting about the popular guy falls for the nerdy girl. I think you ...

I thought it was okay not the best I've seen though. It needs more detail and emotion. Plus, what's the point of this? I think it would be better if ...