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Now that i've thought on this, would it make more sense to reform the sentence to be; "I recognized his accent as foreign. I wondered from where he could have ...

Thank you for writing a review and reading the chapter! Your advice is very helpful and ill keep it in mind as keep writing!

Love how this is more of a sweet note than a rhyming poem. Something different and unique compared to your typical poem. Love it!!

Thank you for reading this and writing a review! I love how you made connections with the short stories and the chapter... Chapter 2 is about to be posted, I've ...

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That's completely understandable. I have the same issue to with the YWS format. Even in the docs or whatever application you use, YWS will remove it and you have to ...

Omg, Sea, your reviews are wonderful! I assure you! I thank you for your kind words, its always a pleasure to see you around YWS and amongst my page sometimes. ...

For this being a mature piece on puberty, I loved reading this. I would most definitely use this to explain to the younger girls before they join the club :')

I appreciate your review and I'll take your advice into consideration! Poetry is not one of my strong suits, short stories are, however, I'm happy to know that you enjoyed ...

I appreciate you for answering my questions! I do agree, I seem to follow more of the first theme. I actually have started writing the first chapter of the novel, ...

Thank you for writing me a review! I do agree, the second verse is more of a bridge, and it probably sits better that way. But I appreciate your review ...

I love your review! You aren't wronf, soundofmind does have some pretty amazing songs! And you did deliver some helpful words! Thank you! ~Taost

I appreciate you taking the time to review this piece! I do agree, I have not been very good at my consistency with poems. I'm more of a short story ...

I'll take that into consideration, thank you! Yes, they are the same person. River is Dakota's callsign. In the book I'm making, it'll dive deeper into that and it will ...

I'm glad you liked it! If you liked this one, I have many other short stories from the same characters. A lot of the names mentioned are characters I use ...