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Re: Harmful Actions Lead To Cruel Minds
I thank you so much for this review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I understand that it can be a tad confusing with the names, But "River" is Dakota's call ...
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Re: Harmful Actions Lead To Cruel Minds
This short story I made out of a challenge from a friend. Make a short story in 20 minutes. Little did I know how difficult that would be. I didn't ...
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Re: My Hill of Stars
I thank you sooo much for writing this review! Your words are extremely helpful and I'll definitely be taking some of the advice given in my future writings. I'm glad ...
Mar 25, 2025 - Re: chrysanthemum Mar 14, 2025
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Re: And She Shall Rise
I highly appreciate this! You taking your time to read my story, even if it's a tad old means a lot to me. While yes, Hope's character is meant to ...
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Re: Soaked in Tea-Filled Thoughts
A piece of this work has been tweaked slightly because one of the lines (One about feeling suffocated) didn't rhyme and it was KILLING me
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Re: Soaked in Tea-Filled Thoughts
Of course! Thank you for reading my poem from the start anyways!
Jan 5, 2025 -
Re: Soaked in Tea-Filled Thoughts
Thank you for reviewing this! The funny story about this was I was up humming to myself and got those questions stuck and my head. Then shot up, thinking "I ...
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Re: Clay
Of course! Writing good poetry is always difficult, but you still wrote an amazing poem!
Jan 4, 2025 -
Re: Soaked in Tea-Filled Thoughts
This poem was written at around 2:30am roughly. I tried to follow a certain pattern, but I see it's kinda wonky :')
Jan 4, 2025 -
Re: Cold Weather, Hot Chocolate
Thank you so much for the feedback! This was very helpful and the advice will be taken in my next stories! ~Taost
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Re: Stay
Thank you so much for the review
Jan 3, 2025 -
Re: Mocha Tea
Link to this songs score!
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Re: Mama's Ex-Husband
Happy new years indeed! This song actually is apart of my series. This was written for a character I haven't used yet named Charlie "Splinter". She's a Captain of a ...
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Re: Stay
Those are some good tips. I'll think back on it when I make edits. Thank you!
Dec 30, 2024
