thelonewriter

Oh my god, this poem is amazing! I can totally relate to the message of your poem since I experience heartbreak and I really wanted the guy back. I love ...

Hi Audy! This is a beautifully written poem here. I like how you were specific on the details about the setting. Though, I couldn't really understand what was going on ...

Hi Booshian! This is a nice poem about a first puppy love. You were kind of right about that fact that it's kind of cheesy. I would've like if you ...

Hi Tacimaci! This is truly an amazing poem about the majesty of the theatre. Every aspect of it is from a realistic perspective and shows how theatre can actually change ...

Hi Romance Writer! You have a seemingly interesting story and some good characters which is good. You do have some spelling errors you need to fix. For example, the word ...

This is one of the best of the best poems I've read on this site. It perfectly shows a young gay man and his relationships with two men. It was ...

This is a very good poem! I liked how you show how the boy loves the main character. I feel like maybe you should of added more and what he ...

Hi Lord Greenleaf, it's me: Thelonewriter. Sorry, I didn't review your second chapter. I had other projects to do so I didn't had time to get to it. So, here's ...

This is really good. There's nice characters and you really made them your own. I like the plot so far but I don't think it would be a good idea ...