theironnovelist

it was intentional for now; I wasn't quite sure what I wanted to do, except for the last stanza. I knew I wanted a statement. so I left it open ...

it was intentional for now; I wasn't quite sure what I wanted to do, except for the last stanza. I knew I wanted a statement. so I left it open ...

thanks! I wasn't quite sure how I wanted the punctuation in this piece other than the end- I wanted it to be more of a statement. so I left it ...

I did think the first half was lacking a bit. thanks for the suggestions/review !

based off emotions. the description touched on that. but yeah. I actually looked through my old journal writings and modified some phrases from it XD. And was dealing with feelings ...

sure. it's mostly in the middle few stanzas. it gets confusing to understand what the meaning of it all is, but most of that is the wording, which is also ...

you wrote a stupid poem so i wrote a stupid review! it works! XD

thanks buddy ^-^

thanks. as for the minimal description of the forest, I intentionally did that; i didn't want to draw too much attention to it to begin with- it's not an incredible ...

Thanks much!

thanks! (and that blank comment of mine was a mistake btw) XD

woah this is cool. i've never actually seen this kind of art on here. (i'm new.) I love the lettering a lot! wish I could write those. kinda like calligraphy, ...

thanks so much! the preview I published earlier is darker (if you haven't read it; it'll explain a little more), as opposed to this chapter; i know it's a lot ...

lol nightflyer... it's weird calling you that