theironnovelist

Incredible ending!! I loved that! I have a pin-back button that reads 'Love and Pain are best friends forever' and how true that is. At first I wasn't too keen ...

I like how the title has nothing yet everything to do with this. It intrigues me why, of all free-flying birds, you choose the pigeon. It does make the audience ...

What a sweet ending! Are you guys still reviewing in English? Well even if you're not...I'll still review this xD It's good that you began and ended with such great ...

hi, teacake. Welcome to YWS:) I'm just gonna dive into an honest review today. Your biggest problem I feel is not the subject, but rather the way in which you ...

Great. Message. I connect on a personal level to this poem and you've done a great job of using description to convey your feelings about these 'places'. At first I ...

Interesting idea to give such characteristics to colors. If I could suggest something, I'd make this even more symbolic. Give even more personification to the colors (personification: describing inani

I love the atmosphere of this poem! The message is fantastic as well, and the simplicity of your way with words is quite stunning. I don't have much to suggest ...

Ooh i really like that tagline at the end. I haven't listened to the audio, so I'll just be reviewing the lyrics today. So I just have one overall thing ...

hello there! in the spirit of Review Day, I represent the Firebolts! The thing I love most about this writing is definitely your way with words. Which is one of ...

hello there! iron.novelist here to review your piece on behalf of the Firebolts! If I have one general suggestion, it would be to change your wording in places. There seem ...

ooh how lovely. this leaves a great amount of room for your audience to ponder the piece, wonder what it's about, and definitely reread it! only a few suggestions I ...

hello there! the.iron.novelist here on behalf of the Firebolts! I just have a few things to point out because otherwise I thought this was pretty well-written: I know that technically, ...

hello there.:) on behalf of the Firebolts, I come with a review! Right off the bat, these sound more like song lyrics than poetry. To me, poetry is imagery, description, ...

Somehow your description is so simple and subtle, yet spot-on. I tasted every word, drank every stanza. Loved it. What inspired this? You have a way of painting pictures beautifully ...

Hello there! Can I just say I feel connected to this piece because it reminds me a lot of the kind of poetry I write! There's so much I love ...