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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Tell Me

    It's quite alright; I wasn't offended. And you're welcome.

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you found something to relate to. I can relate to your situation as something similar was happening to me when I had ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    What the.... :D I open the notifications and it says "17 comments on your work" and I get here and see this!!

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    Hi Lee! Thank you for your words of appreciation and for the thoughtful suggestions. I would like to address your suggestions one by one: 1. The phrasing of the sentence ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    Thank you for your thoughtful suggestions and your words of appreciation. The objective of this poem was to convey a personal experience, but in a way that it reaches out ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    Hi EthanHoover! Thank you for the review and the appreciation. I put some thought into your suggestions and I would like to reply to each suggestion in detail. 1. I ...

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emptiness

    You're welcome, and thank you for the appreciation.

    Apr 2, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Wonder

    Thank you for your appreciation. I'll surely post if I make it longer and more detailed.

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: We can end poverty

    Thank you for your appreciation, Bhavya.

    Mar 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: We can end poverty

    Thank you for the review and the words of appreciation. I have made the correction, thank you for pointing it out.

    Mar 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Dusk

    Thank you for the words of appreciation. I have made the correction now.

    Mar 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: We can end poverty

    Thank you

    Mar 1, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Wonder

    This work has been subject to some confusion as I have put this in the "Romance" category. However, I meant literary romance, as in romanticizing and not sexual romance. I'm ...

    Feb 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Wonder

    This work has been subject to some confusion as I have put this in the "Romance" category. However, I meant literary romance, as in romanticizing and not sexual romance. The ...

    Feb 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Wonder

    This work has been subject to some confusion as I have put this in the "Romance" category. However, I meant literary romance, as in romanticizing and not sexual romance. The ...

    Feb 29, 2020


The shame of being a man - is there any better reason to write?
— Gilles Deleuze