thegoldenbird

Thank you for the appreciation!

Thank you for the detailed read, the review, and for those sweet words!

Thank you for the review. I understand what you mean by inadequacy in imagery, but this piece is a bit personal, so I'm going to keep it this way. I'll ...

Hi Bhaiya. I'm glad you got the feel that I wanted to convey. As per your suggestion, I have removed "The" in the first line. However, I want to keep ...

These unseen mental illnesses are sure suffocating. Glad that you got the feel that I wanted to convey. Thank you for your appreciation!

Thank you for the detailed reading. As for the answer to whether the pain is worse or the numbness, I don't know either. I've left it for the reader to ...

Hey there! I'd like to address your suggestions: 1. I have intentionally used the word "hardened" for "eyes with unspilled tears". I actually didn't want to show the subject teary-eyed ...

You're most welcome. I myself am no stranger to Hindi literature and the idiom. I just pointed it out for your reference :)

I have made a couple of changes; please check if the issues have been taken care of. Thank you for your words of appreciation.

Thank you so much for the appreciation. Indeed, it is difficult to explain to the society that it is okay to not be okay. This mentality forces us into a ...

Thank you so much for going through my works and for the appreciation

Thanks a lot for the appreciation

Thanks! P.S. You could check out some more of my work.

Thanks for the appreciation. I know this is quite short, but I actually wanna keep it that way. P. S. Would you like to check out some of my other ...

Thank you for the review, Shay. I usually use em-dashes too. I don't know how I forgot to use them here. And thanks for the appreciation! P.S. You could check ...