thegoldenbird

Thank you for your thoughts. As far as your confusion is concerned, I think the last 2 lines of the poem should be able to clarify that.

Of course what you say is right. I just wanted to present a different perspective of world peace. Most people think that peace can only be achieved when war is ...

Actually I just wanted to present a different perspective of world peace. Most people think that peace can only be achieved when war is completely over. But often refugees have ...

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Of course what you say is right. I just wanted to present a different perspective of world peace. Most people think that peace can only be achieved when war is ...

Thank you for pointing out that mistake, and for the appreciation :)

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

Thank you for your words of appreciation :)

Thank you for pointing out the shortcomings. Certain phrases have been added for dramatic effect, though they seem a bit elaborate. So I would like to keep them that way. ...

No problem! However, let me also point out to you that the word "gravity" always refers to the acceleration due to gravity (g), which as you said, has no relation ...

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Thank you for the words of appreciation. This poem is a bit personal, so I would like to keep it this way for now. However, I will surely expand it ...

Thank you for the appreciation. I've taken care of the shortcomings. How about another read?

Once again, you're making the same mistake. Weight and mass are almost the same in this context, and gravity has nothing to do with either of them. What you're trying ...

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