thegirlwhofateloves

....hmmmm....yeah it does a bit. At first I thought "is this going to be any good......" but then it did get better.

I liked it. Typical frustration of the artiste!!! lol :wink:

Frozen peas? I like your style!! :D

Why does that bug you?

What's un-yourselfish?!

I thought this was good. It was so sad. And you're only 13!

I loved it. (There seem to be no romantics left in the world. I don't know any anyway)

Hmmm.....I....... Hmmmmmmmm.

I can't do titles lol :oops: Oh well... I agree that it is a bit messy, but to a certain extent it it supposed to be...read the first couple of ...

Yay! I did something right for a change!! :elephant: well, kind of right lol....

Thanks for the suggestions, emoition less, I'll take it on board! O:) Anyone else care to comment? Or is it really not worth it???? :shock:

I agree...it's a really nice poem...i like it

I agree. I think that it's because it's a diary that it's always affected me so much. It's so full of emotion that it's amazing.

I keep getting halfway through it and then forgetting to pick it up again lol. I'm getting very bored with the first half of that bloody book! But yes, I ...

There is so much more to this poem than just the words. It sparks the imagination. I really like it. Kind of agree with duskglimmer about changing 'sparkly' to 'sparkling'....hmmmm....actually ...