thegirlwhofateloves

Jennafina - chalk white as...... dust..... ....see :?: emotion less....I kind of know what you was a difficult line to word...hmmm...thankies.

...I respect you for that :wink: lol....I like all your stuff, pretty much, but this was definitely one of me favourites.

My....unexpected! lol :D I see what you mean...and actually, yeah...what you've suggested is a good idea. I think I was kind of experimenting with layout and stuff, and I was ...

^^ Good :wink:

Lol to be honest, if you see that in my poetry, then fair enough :) . I'm not in the least bit religious, but I can see how, if you ...

I see what you mean. The last stanza is kind of off....I like the first two lines, but not sure about the rest of it. And I totally agree - ...

Quite liked it. I'm so not helpful, lol x

This is fantastic hun. Completely faultless, simple and beautiful. I love it. x

Basically, last week I saw my ex who I dumped because he did a lot of bad things to me, and he looked right at me and didn't take his ...

:shock: Clearly like marmite....

Mmmmm the ending was ok, was very sad, but it was the only bit I liked.

Of Mice and Men *shudders* I'm sorry, I thought it was dull. No I haven't read The Pearl, but I may have a look at it now. Hell, I'll try ...

Yes, it was just written when I was a bit down and in a thoughful mood. But clearly not a particularly articulate one lol :D

Hmmmm. Maybe it needs a teensy bit of revision???? :D lol I'll have a look at it, because I see what you all mean and I think I could probably ...

:evil: I HATED it. *moans* oh dear god, memories of year 11......... Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.